tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3240843384437350165.post6355959621696198930..comments2019-12-28T22:58:26.552-05:00Comments on Stay A JBJ Fan Fiction: Ch. 23Shellyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13772709532298829619noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3240843384437350165.post-17449753793246374392008-08-25T14:47:00.000-04:002008-08-25T14:47:00.000-04:00Really good balance in this chapter: A frustrated...Really good balance in this chapter: A frustrated and frightened Jon, not trusting Trina fully yet; a devious-sounding Ally who makes me wonder what her drug-addled mind is going to cook up; Richie's love for Jon as a brother and being there for him; and the potential there with the comment about Doc and Dot pushing Jon too hard.<BR/><BR/>Every chapter is so wonderful, Shell, just urging the reader to want more and more and MORE! <BR/><BR/>I really love this story!Sunstreakedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07144150267670415273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3240843384437350165.post-53537810447769559522008-08-17T20:09:00.000-04:002008-08-17T20:09:00.000-04:00Another great chapter! Thanks for letting me know ...Another great chapter! Thanks for letting me know it was up! Must agree with Sheena though, I'm not liking Ally either lol Hope they get Jon to shut up for 2weeks to save his voice! Keep up the good work, I'm hooked!Sedona Sunrisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05635523410221505349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3240843384437350165.post-84441223208184266522008-08-17T19:26:00.000-04:002008-08-17T19:26:00.000-04:00Loved the chapter but I don't like Ally. It was gr...Loved the chapter but I don't like Ally. It was great! :)<BR/><BR/>SheenaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3240843384437350165.post-64509001310247732932008-08-17T18:04:00.000-04:002008-08-17T18:04:00.000-04:00A great looong chapter, tomorrow I start my holida...A great looong chapter, tomorrow I start my holidays... life is good LOL THANK YOU!! (Please, please , please go on!!!) LauraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com